Deep


So deep in the thought that the world is surreal to my mind.
Dodging criticisms and evading bullet wounds from ignorant fools.
Paying my dues, staying out the news and ignoring the hubris like yesterday’s views.
While some in the world are stuck hesitant about the future watching out for the rapture,
I’m smiling knowing how I’ll live forever.
So you go on and survive kissing tips and eating lies while twitching your hips.

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2 thoughts on “Deep

    1. I first referred to a thought so compelling that the reality outside of my mind changed and became different. Beyond the first sentence I totally switched the direction of the path I started on and introduced ideas distinct from it finally ending on a sentence in complete contrast to everything else mentioned.

      Dodging criticisms and evading bullet wounds from ignorant fools meaning that I am withstanding the disapproval of others and their intolerance to different veins of thinking because it doesn’t suit them.

      Paying my dues, staying out the news and ignoring hubris like yesterday’s news refers to my independence living on my own, not being in conflict with the law and not paying attention to the vain and conceited who like yesterday matters little compared to the future I look toward to.

      While some in the world are stuck hesitant about the future watching w out for the rapture,
      I’m smiling knowing how I’ll live forever referring to the religious bigots opposed to what contradict their ideas; those who through fear have become the victim of their belief systems accepting ideas of salvation not realizing that eternity belongs to procreation.

      The last sentence refers to those who accept lies more than the truth while they enjoy life in spite of problematic situations remaining unresolved. There is another aspect as well, human beings who live life going place to place with no clear idea of what they want deceiving themselves by choosing the wrong path while hoping to get results that required a completely different approach in their lives. They live in a cauldron of confusion and hope and their appetites are fed by untruths.

      I hope this explains what the poem means well enough.

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